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Nightray
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Well, lets try this. I'd like your coments on My first attempt at at air ship. I know it's not as good as the other one posted. But thats why I posted it. The other one is too good to fall into the Mangy hands of my players. Anyway, please let me know what you think.
Storm Breaker
Storm Breaker Level 2
Storm Breaker Level 3
And Giving Credit where credit is due.I'd like to thank tmaaas. At first I decided to never draw a map again after I looked at his Airship, But then decided if he can give it a shot I can too. Thanks tmaaas
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Edited by Nightray on 04/28/2008 at 8:22pm
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heruca
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Welcome, Nightray.
Nice design. I like how you used the raised walls to create metal girders/framework.
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mercutio
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There's an issue with scaling at the helm. It's really pixelated. Otherwise, I think it's a pretty good first map.
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Nightray
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Heruca, I really didn't that was the raised walls effect, I just made the "Walls" only a foot wide, so that when I did the effect it looked metalic. I'd love to get sharper edges, but not sure how.
mercutio, I was looking for an image i could use for the helm, thats a coat rack, lol. The pixelation is because i made it so large. I'll keep an eye out for a better helm. Unless you know where one is at?
P.S. Just finished the lower 2 levels, I'll post those too. Mine is only 3 levels. And yes 3 is supposed to be smaller, it where the ship narrows.
Edited by Nightray on 04/28/2008 at 8:24pm
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heruca
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Are you looking at Mercutio's forum rank of "Hero" and interpreting that as a
username?
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Nightray
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See. Told you I was a N00b.
Edited by Nightray on 04/28/2008 at 9:08pm
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Bogie
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Awesome ship Nightray!! 
We're playing a Spelljammer campaign so we spend a lot of time on ships.
If possible,  could you post a version either with no grid or just a light grey one?
Here are some ship items you might find useful:
 
 
 
 
 
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aegean
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oh yeah - nice pieces....
The ships wheel would work well in a bar, not that I frequent these places 
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Nightray
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Sweet, Thanks Guys. The new Wheel looks Great, Bogie, I lightened the lines a Lot. But I don't mind sharing, If you want I could send the whole DJ file so you can make whatever minor Mods you Wanted. I am just excited it turned out so well.
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Nightray wrote:
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The DJA file would be great, then I can make any changes I need, Thanks!
You can zip the DJA files and post them here, or you can email them to me (email address is in the profile at the bottom of this post)
Very nice ship, very interesting design.
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Dundjinni Mapping Software - Forums : Maps
Topic: A Smaller Eberron Elemental Airship
